Saturday, July 23, 2011

Doctor My Eyes

Doctor My Eyes has seen the years
And the slow parade of tears
Without crying

2 comments:

  1. just a random little thing that I thought I might um correct you on unless it is just poetic license at this point um has should be have just grammerly.

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  2. and I just realized that the thing I just wrote has about a billion grammar issues and a spelling so ignore me.

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